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The Last Train to Halcyon

Chapter 1: Cold Wake

The compartment answers you with silence and motion.

Every sway of the carriage shifts the shadows across the berth walls, making the room seem to breathe around you. The air is warm, stale, and threaded with the copper taste of old circuitry. Somewhere beyond the door, the train gives a low metallic groan, long enough to feel like a warning.

You force yourself to look again.

The berth is narrow, stripped to the essentials: a folded blanket cinched at the foot, a mesh pocket with a sealed water packet, a paper sickness bag, and the thin amber lamp washing everything in a tired glow. The door is still locked from the outside. Beside it, a red indicator pulses with mechanical patience.

Your hand tightens around the keycard you found in the bedding.

It is worn smooth at the edges, the surface scuffed by use, but the printed name remains just legible enough to catch at your breath. Yours. Or something close enough to make your stomach turn. You turn it over once, twice, hoping for more—an access code, a carriage number, anything that would explain why it was in your pocket at all. There is nothing.

Then the ceiling speaker crackles.

"Passenger in sleeper seven," the voice says, calm and official, as if the world outside still obeys timetables and common sense. "Proceed to Carriage Three. Repeat: Carriage Three."

The words should comfort you. They do not.

The announcement sounds corrected, as though someone has already changed it once and may change it again before the sentence is done. For a fraction of a second, the broadcast fractures, and underneath the polished tone you catch something else—static, breath, a human edge almost too faint to be real.

"Still awake," it murmurs.

Then the line cuts clean.

A soft scrape comes through the wall beside you.

Not from the corridor. From the adjacent berth.

Someone else is here, close enough to hear your breathing if they’re listening. Close enough that waking them might get you answers—or trouble. The train surges forward, and the indicator beside the door blinks red, red, red, as if counting down to a decision you haven’t made yet.

Beyond the sealed panel, somewhere in the dark, the route is already changing.

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