The Last Train to Halcyon
Chapter 1: Cold Wake
The compartment feels smaller when you stand.
The berth cushions sag behind you, still warm from your body, and the train keeps hammering onward through darkness so complete it seems pressed against the metal skin of the carriage. Every sway of the floor returns the same nauseating certainty: you are moving fast, you are enclosed, and you have no idea how you got here.
You scan the room in jagged pieces. Narrow berth. A folded blanket strapped into place. A mesh pocket on the wall holding a sealed water packet and a paper sickness bag. The lamp above the bunk glows the color of weak tea. Beneath it, the compartment door sits shut with a mechanical finality that makes your throat tighten.
Your hand goes to the pocket of your clothes on instinct.
Something there.
You pull out a keycard, scuffed enough to have lost its shine. The plastic is old, the corners rounded from use, and one side is stamped with a name that makes your stomach twist—not because you recognize it, but because it feels almost right. Close enough to hurt.
Your own name.
Maybe.
The door panel beside it remains dead to the touch, a red indicator pulsing as if the lock is breathing. You try the handle anyway. It won’t give. The compartment has been sealed from the outside.
A crackle bursts overhead.
"Passenger in sleeper seven," the train’s voice says again, smooth as polished glass. "Proceed to Carriage Three. Do not delay."
The wording lands wrong. Not urgent. Adjusting.
As if someone, somewhere, is rewriting the instructions in real time.
Then the speaker distorts. For half a second the broadcast wavers, and beneath the official tone you hear something else threaded through it—faint static, a human cadence, almost a whisper.
"—still awake. Good."
The line cuts out.
A beat later, something thuds in the corridor outside. Not a casual step. A body, maybe, or a hand striking metal hard enough to rattle the frame. You freeze, listening.
Silence.
Then another sound: a soft scrape along the other side of the wall, where the adjacent berth should be.
Someone else is awake too.
The train lurches, and the keycard slips in your palm. Carriage Three. A changing schedule. A locked door. Someone nearby who may know more than they should.
For now, the compartment offers you only a few hard possibilities—and the train offers no mercy for hesitation.
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